Using Coca Cola as an intro is quite strong hook. Your presentation sounds easy to everyone as you used proper and familiar examples. I like that point the most. However, I think you speak too fast and monotonously and it makes you sound nervous. If you speak little bit slower, you would sound much better.
Hey there, first i personally liked the idea of your presentation and the intro is strong enough to hook me in , using the facts about the brand you have choose was also a nice support of your information , just wish you work on the skills of speaking a bit more , speaking slower is the first step to start in my opinion, thank you
Using Coca Cola as an intro is quite strong hook. Your presentation sounds easy to everyone as you used proper and familiar examples. I like that point the most. However, I think you speak too fast and monotonously and it makes you sound nervous. If you speak little bit slower, you would sound much better.
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Hey there, first i personally liked the idea of your presentation and the intro is strong enough to hook me in , using the facts about the brand you have choose was also a nice support of your information , just wish you work on the skills of speaking a bit more , speaking slower is the first step to start in my opinion, thank you
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