I think it is very persuasive. You just introduced an application, but it made me want to use it! Especially I liked that you showed it and explained about it in detail. That's the best point in your presentation. However, I think it would be much greater if you speak louder and differenciate your voice tone as you sound little bit monotonous now.
Thanks for nice presentation! It was very informative and its overall structure was also firm and clear. The visuals was undoubtedly helpful and, your slow pace and calm voice make it easier for the audience to follow your speech. However, it seems that your presentation lacks of vocal variety which is the most important evaluation criteria. So I suggest you to reflect components of vocal variety in your speech which will draw more attention.
I think it is very persuasive. You just introduced an application, but it made me want to use it! Especially I liked that you showed it and explained about it in detail. That's the best point in your presentation. However, I think it would be much greater if you speak louder and differenciate your voice tone as you sound little bit monotonous now.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for nice presentation! It was very informative and its overall structure was also firm and clear. The visuals was undoubtedly helpful and, your slow pace and calm voice make it easier for the audience to follow your speech. However, it seems that your presentation lacks of vocal variety which is the most important evaluation criteria. So I suggest you to reflect components of vocal variety in your speech which will draw more attention.
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