Hello ~ it's me bochra. First of all, that was an interesting and catchy topic. Before opening the link i thought it's going to be like travel or food because the topic's name "let's get ready for winter" i was wondering for a second. Well well well ! First , i really like the way you get rid of the script by using small cards which still a problem for me . I have a problem with script i usually stick to it to not get lost but in your case you did a good job. Second, i like the eye contact not only that but also you have applied all vocal variety that we have studied in class. Your voice only makes me stucking in the topic and never get bored. However i wanted to mention that i noticed that you barely could breathe and i bet that your throat was dry and u needed a cup of water. Girl u are really excelent but the thing is in your upcoming presentations use silence to take a break it won't cost you anything . Good Job and your presentation was really amazing keep it up.
Christmas is behind the doors and my time in Korea is shortening, I was struggling to decide on what I could buy as a gift to my parents and friends. I knew that Korean beauty care is popular all around the world, but there so many products out there to choose from. After listening to you presentation I have built up a trust with Innisfree products and bought another creams for my friends. Thank you for giving an amazing presentation and making my life easier. In terms of the technical matters of the presentation, I think that you have fullfilled the requirements of vocal variety as well as the Visuals. See you in class!
Hello ~ it's me bochra. First of all, that was an interesting and catchy topic. Before opening the link i thought it's going to be like travel or food because the topic's name "let's get ready for winter" i was wondering for a second. Well well well ! First , i really like the way you get rid of the script by using small cards which still a problem for me . I have a problem with script i usually stick to it to not get lost but in your case you did a good job. Second, i like the eye contact not only that but also you have applied all vocal variety that we have studied in class. Your voice only makes me stucking in the topic and never get bored. However i wanted to mention that i noticed that you barely could breathe and i bet that your throat was dry and u needed a cup of water. Girl u are really excelent but the thing is in your upcoming presentations use silence to take a break it won't cost you anything . Good Job and your presentation was really amazing keep it up.
ReplyDeleteDear Jenny,
ReplyDeleteChristmas is behind the doors and my time in Korea is shortening, I was struggling to decide on what I could buy as a gift to my parents and friends. I knew that Korean beauty care is popular all around the world, but there so many products out there to choose from. After listening to you presentation I have built up a trust with Innisfree products and bought another creams for my friends. Thank you for giving an amazing presentation and making my life easier. In terms of the technical matters of the presentation, I think that you have fullfilled the requirements of vocal variety as well as the Visuals. See you in class!
Your bff David. ;)