hey soroush ~ it's me bochra. As i was present during your presentation and also we watched together in class. the important thing that i have noticed in this presentation is that u looked more confident and the way you persuade the audience was really brillant.I admit that i'm not into neither business nor economic but i couldn't take my eyes and ears way while you were speaking. Your topic was interesting u had an eye contact and all. that's impressive however it would be perfect if you let go the script and use something like card. Good job and i wish you a good luck in the near future
i watched your presentation and have to stay i really liked it. the topic was well chosen, you spoke loud and clearly and delivered your message well. you used gestures, different intonations and also made eye contact with the audience. compared to your first speech, you seemed more prepared and confident. i also liked the way you used pauses. the only critic i can say about your speech is that you stuttered a little but and were dependent on your script sometimes. if you can improve that, i think you will do really well!
good luck for the next time. with kind regards, Thu An xx
hey soroush ~ it's me bochra. As i was present during your presentation and also we watched together in class. the important thing that i have noticed in this presentation is that u looked more confident and the way you persuade the audience was really brillant.I admit that i'm not into neither business nor economic but i couldn't take my eyes and ears way while you were speaking. Your topic was interesting u had an eye contact and all. that's impressive however it would be perfect if you let go the script and use something like card.
ReplyDeleteGood job and i wish you a good luck in the near future
hey soroush,
ReplyDeletei watched your presentation and have to stay i really liked it. the topic was well chosen, you spoke loud and clearly and delivered your message well. you used gestures, different intonations and also made eye contact with the audience. compared to your first speech, you seemed more prepared and confident. i also liked the way you used pauses. the only critic i can say about your speech is that you stuttered a little but and were dependent on your script sometimes. if you can improve that, i think you will do really well!
good luck for the next time.
with kind regards, Thu An xx