I could see how much you prepared it hard. You opened your speech with a story and I think it is good start. You look little nervous, still your speed is not so fast so it is good to follow. But I think your word choice is too bookish. I think you can lower the tone of your words so that the audience would feel more familiar as it is a speech, not an essay.
I could see how much you prepared it hard. You opened your speech with a story and I think it is good start.
ReplyDeleteYou look little nervous, still your speed is not so fast so it is good to follow.
But I think your word choice is too bookish. I think you can lower the tone of your words so that the audience would feel more familiar as it is a speech, not an essay.
Yousun Jung 201003163
I saw that he put a lot of effort into the preparation of this presentation. Nice opening; telling a story about a man.
ReplyDeleteEye contact could be improved.
Hyeonju Lee 201502709