Dongwon Kang: Thanks for the nice presentation! I really enjoyed watching it. The general and specific purpose of your speech was clear as you introduced them neatly in the opening of the presentation and your gestures and direct language also made it easier for me to follow the overall contents of your speech. However, in my opinion, I carefully recommend you to further develop the conclusion so that it catches the audience's attention till the end.
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Dongwon Kang: Thanks for the nice presentation! I really enjoyed watching it. The general and specific purpose of your speech was clear as you introduced them neatly in the opening of the presentation and your gestures and direct language also made it easier for me to follow the overall contents of your speech. However, in my opinion, I carefully recommend you to further develop the conclusion so that it catches the audience's attention till the end.
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