I think you used visual material in effective way so that it could drew the audiences' attraction. You delivered the message in calm and mild voice tone, and it was really good. I think it would be greater if you reduce some grammatical errors in your sentences and make it little more smoothly, because I could see you were little bit nervous. I know it is not easy, but take it easy. Thank you for good speech.
Dongwon Kang: First,I would like to thank you for the nice presentation! As your topic appears to be unique and novel, it really drew my attention from the opening. Although your voice was small, it didn't disturbed me from focusing on your speech but rather it made me comfortable with your smooth tone during the presentation. Lastly, I liked that you interacted with audience by asking them question. However, it would be better if you develop your opening and conclusion more memorable to grab audience's attention.
I think you used visual material in effective way so that it could drew the audiences' attraction. You delivered the message in calm and mild voice tone, and it was really good.
ReplyDeleteI think it would be greater if you reduce some grammatical errors in your sentences and make it little more smoothly, because I could see you were little bit nervous. I know it is not easy, but take it easy.
Thank you for good speech.
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ReplyDeleteDongwon Kang: First,I would like to thank you for the nice presentation! As your topic appears to be unique and novel, it really drew my attention from the opening. Although your voice was small, it didn't disturbed me from focusing on your speech but rather it made me comfortable with your smooth tone during the presentation. Lastly, I liked that you interacted with audience by asking them question. However, it would be better if you develop your opening and conclusion more memorable to grab audience's attention.
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