hello bochra, this is thu an! the topic of your speech and introduction were very interesting and it caught my attention. the point you wanted to get across was understood and that was the main task, which you fulfilled. you used good visuals, but it felt more like a presentation than a speech. you spoke clearly, which is good but sometimes you still seemed nervous and stuttered. you lacked gestures and i wanted to see a bit more interaction with the crowd, but maybe that was not your intention. overall i can still say that it was a nice presentation and it was pleasant to listen to. next time you should try not to be so nervous though! good luck xx
hello bochra, this is thu an! the topic of your speech and introduction were very interesting and it
ReplyDeletecaught my attention. the point you wanted to get across was understood and that was the main task,
which you fulfilled. you used good visuals, but it felt more like a presentation than a speech. you
spoke clearly, which is good but sometimes you still seemed nervous and stuttered. you lacked
gestures and i wanted to see a bit more interaction with the crowd, but maybe that was not your
intention. overall i can still say that it was a nice presentation and it was pleasant to listen to. next
time you should try not to be so nervous though! good luck xx